Naked in the Snow

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    • NekodaGirl
    • is having a relaxing drink in with my wife^.^

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    I have never danced naked in snow before, but this is what I imagine it would be like were I to do it.  Maybe this is how snowflakes feel.

    Naked in the Snow

     Makes me feel alive
    as you glitter from the sky
    shock my skin again
    I beg you to electrify
    screaming dancing
    laughing prancing
    twirling in my skin alone
    around me ice and snow are whirling
    Moonlight makes the world sterling

    Blue my lips and strong my sense
    I feel my soul and not my flesh
    My laughter a pealing, rippling sound
    Echoes round and round and round
    The Finest frost my only garment
    shards of ice, holiest armament

    And still I'm dancing,
    leaping
    screaming
    into darkness and out of being
    and into thought and out of form
    THIS is what they mean by Seeing
    Knowing in its purest form

    And have you any idea how good this feels?
    Human's have never lived so real

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    bknight commented on Naked in the Snow

    09-07-2009

    great poem vivid imagery, you capture the spirit and the imagination....thanks...B
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    UnworthyFather commented on Naked in the Snow

    06-23-2009

    This is a beautifully written work of art! The imagery is superb, and the meter and flow are excellent. Thank you for sharing. 10
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    NekodaGirl

    06/23/2009

    hey thank you ^.^ I'm glad you sent the friend request, as I'm new on here and don't know for sure how it all works ^.^ I look forward to reading some of your work!

    NekodaGirl

    06/23/2009

    hey thank you ^.^ I'm glad you sent the friend request, as I'm new on here and don't know for sure how it all works ^.^ I look forward to reading some of your work!

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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