my world....

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my world....

In my mind

the roses are red

and violets are blue

but when you look at me

please don’t judge

because you don’t know

what I’ve been through….

When you meet me

I’m a fun loving

self-proclaimed lame

enjoys people’s happiness and games

soaking up the attention given

from my poetic acclaim….

But when you look further than the surface

and notice i may be a little bit broken

you would realize

my real eyes

look past and see through

the real lies

given to me

Long-

Long ago…

because that’s when i realized

i was alone

and on my

own…

so my world is split

between

being righteous or a shame,

your happiness or my pain,

or picking both and living with

flowers

and

flames….

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ShadowEyes commented on my world....

04-16-2011

Well written. I like it. Too many people are quick to judge, they don't want to get to know us before they say "Oh they are this" or "they are that" Very nice. Keep it up.

Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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