My Very First But Not Last Poem

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My Very First But Not Last Poem

As I sit in the halls of this monument dedicated to the educators who enrich the minds of the little people looking for direction or at least a signal of which way to turn. I watch as they form their clans lined up against the wall. Some sit around with no care in the world and damage everything insite and yet you think this is where I belong. Here with the little people. My desire for immediate satisfaction doesn't allow me to sit around and be fly or chillin or laugh..no to everyone's suprise my overwhelming thoughts of gaining ones truest pride ones truest joy I must relent myself from the distractions of the everyday little people.

Sabrina Taylor

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Phoenix9 commented on My Very First But Not Last Poem

01-02-2009

nicely done, waiting for more

joeallegro commented on My Very First But Not Last Poem

12-28-2008

I like the way you think...write some more...looking forward to it.

rollerderby commented on My Very First But Not Last Poem

12-27-2008

Like you I started writing in school, I've been writing ever since. I really liked the way you presented your poem,I'm glad you had a teacher that was willing to go that extra mile for you. Well done. Rollerderby.

edward123 commented on My Very First But Not Last Poem

12-22-2008

very good keep on howard rice singer /songwriter

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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