my soldier not home for Christmas

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    my soldier not home for Christmas

    i made a dash for the snow outside
    to mask the pain i cannot hide.
    your promise broken once more, this year,
    of coming home - i hoped. with fear.

    what Christmas is it again for me -
    with you out fighting, i, forcing glee?
    will you keep safe, and keep the faith -
    for amid the tears, here i will wait.

    love hurts because you are at war.
    this truth many in silence, bear.
    once more, this year, it'll just be me,
    the snow, the fireplace, and the tree.

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    LenaMP commented on my soldier not home for Christmas

    01-20-2010

    A sad reminder that the families at home suffer as our soldiers defend and protect. Best of luck to you and yours. Nicely written.

    origionalmerlin commented on my soldier not home for Christmas

    03-23-2009

    one brick at a time home is torn down and rebuilt in a servicemans heart and his/her familys too hurry up and wait, then wait some more after the first smile back the whole world is made right again, both ways and all around.

    ozzydio18 commented on my soldier not home for Christmas

    02-22-2009

    i like your poem if you get a chance check mine out i could use the rating i have rating on just on of 3

    fisfall commented on my soldier not home for Christmas

    02-21-2009

    Hi Red, "It'll just be me, the snow, the fireplace and the tree" What a sad and lonely picture you painted with your words! fisfall

    lonewolf commented on my soldier not home for Christmas

    12-28-2008

    lets pray he comes home safely soon. nice poem

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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