My minds not a well

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    My minds not a well

     Move one inch at a time.
    Don't make shit rhyme.
    Would it be easy to repeat the first line?
    My mind's not a well;
    It won't run dry.
    Just keep drinking water and you'll be alright.
    This is paralysis with no time at all to let go.

    Well don't call me by my full name,
    And all this is temporary.
    It feels much better to know that you won't feel a thing.
    Well don't talk about it;
    Write it down but don't ask for help.
    I can't be honest with even myself.
    Did you ever wish you were somebody else?

    Accomplishments are transient.
    They pulled me in unremittingly.
    Just lasting this long,
    I feel relieved to let repetition save me.

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    mustascheman commented on My minds not a well

    02-22-2010

    Very cool! Yes, writing though at times seems repetative, can be quite thereputic. Well done.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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