My love

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    My love

    When we're together it feels so right
    I'm glad we met that hot july night
    You're always smiling,laughing,being silly
    That's what attracted this shy hillbilly
    I love looking into your eyes so Blue
    You make me happy just by being you
    You've been there through good times and bad
    You're truely the best friend I've ever had
    When nobody else thought I was right
    You were the one who held me tight
    You made me feel so very much
    All it took was your gentle touch
    Thank you for letting me be me
    When I think of happiness you are what I see
    You're a blessing from heaven above
    To you I devote my undying love

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    TMK commented on My love

    01-13-2010

    I believe she sacrificed a deeper meaning of the poem for her rhymes.

    Pisces00 commented on My love

    08-26-2009

    Aww this was amazing. Normally Im very irritated when I read poems that rhyme because there arent alot of good ones but this just makes you smile because there is always some at one point or another that makes you feel this way. Thanks..I was depressed and it made me feel soo much better

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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