Feeling

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Feeling

Sorrow fills my heart and soul
grasps them tight and wont let go
just as the trees in the wind shall blow
its destiny is to take control!
Of a life still burning from so much pain
of a soul still yearning to win the game
I reach out and call its name
"Destiny!" i feel i'm going insane
the winds of change torture my soul
like icy knives they cut and flow
causing outbursts of chaos wherever they go
with change comes knowledge of things good and bad
thoughts cloud my mind of the best and worst times i've had
as my brain hopelessly spins,trying to comprehend
i lay here and wonder if this is the end.........

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Khadija commented on Feeling

05-30-2009

You are truely gifted and I really enjoy reading your poems. When im ready to post one, i hope you'll also enjoy readining mine.

Geminigurl

06/28/2009

thank you

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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