My Love

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    My Love

    I don't say, I will die for you
    But, I will say, I will live
    To at least bring, smile to your lips

    I may sometimes, forget things
    But, everything of you, for you and
    By you, will be a thing of great concern

    I am liable to be impatient at times
    But, will always try to
    Hear you, with all the patience

    I don't say, for you, I will bring stars from the sky
    But, will try
    To brighten your life, with cheers

    I can't say, life will always bring happiness
    But, promise to be there, to dry your tears,
    Help you, hold you in arms and to share

    I may not proclaim my love, over and over again
    But my smile, concern, patience, cheers
    And sharing, will tell you subtly, that
    I always care for you.

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    devaduta commented on My Love

    08-04-2010

    It's indeed a realistic expression of true love devoid of hypocritic substance. Well done Prity

    ccslim commented on My Love

    04-13-2009

    Well said within content! The ending left me short meaning my heart needed to hear more.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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