mikeg commented on My loss, Anothers gain!

12-11-2009

I see pain in your words...A longing only known by a few David. I think because I know you I have better insight on what it is you write. You just want her to notice you. It seems as though you feel hidden to her. Someone with a sharper more keen eye for passion and love will see the unseen, my friend!

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themommyof2 commented on My loss, Anothers gain!

11-27-2009

very romantic for a young man. keep this up and you will go far in life in many ways.

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DANi89Rose commented on My loss, Anothers gain!

08-02-2009

yea ur use of words is great very short and to the point i love ur style of writing

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Paint commented on My loss, Anothers gain!

07-06-2009

again this to me seems like noticing someone and longing for them without them knowing, a secret love that aches in the heart.... like the poem shakespeare wrote about a girl's eyebrow lol. I like it.

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BooTz commented on My loss, Anothers gain!

06-29-2009

i think this piece says it all with little words.it's short but u get ur point across. very good

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