My Life

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    • TheAngelOfDeath
    • Posted a new poem first time is a few years check it out its a draft as of right now ill fix the spelling and stuff when I have time

    My Life
    My life is but a whirl wind of sorrow and shame..
    Shards of metal, like knifes, lodge in my brain..
    I walk through this..
    Screams calling my name..
    Unphased i go on..
    Displacing the pain..

    Alone on this dark road tattered and torn..
    These voices of the forlorn..I try to ignore..
    They call to me "save me" but yet i reframe..
    I live with the suffering..I live with the blame..

    This wind tears through me like a blade through my chest..
    This constant agony...
    My spirit wont rest...

    A light's in the distance..
    Is this a test?...
    It's the Front Gates Of Hell...
    I died from the stress...

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    andais commented on My Life

    09-15-2009

    Wow...your talent is unbelieveable. The descriptive way you explain sorrow is abslolutely amazing......it is a priviledge to read your work.
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    Zephyr commented on My Life

    09-02-2009

    There are poems that anyone can grasp, there are poems no one can grasp, and then there are poems that only a select few can grasp. This is one of the latter. I've felt this way many a time, and have never been able to put it into words. I bow before you in recognition. You have a gift. The gift of words. Very few possess the power to paint images with words, but you are one of those few. Well done doesn't even begin to cover it.
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    jonnydgo commented on My Life

    06-23-2009

    Your words are really thrilling, but, you are not what you write. If you are i would have feel the passion.
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    kareemrocks3 commented on My Life

    05-04-2009

    such a powerful poem yet u should try to enjoy life and find a way to let go of the pain
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    anitadaniels40 commented on My Life

    04-16-2009

    thats some powerful words; you can really feel the pain as you read the poem.
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    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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