MY KNIGHT: IN DRIPPING ARMOR

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    MY KNIGHT: IN DRIPPING ARMOR

    My knight in dripping armor
    jostled me rushing in to shore.
    Fearing an ocean in my lungs and
    hearing my final gulp of air
    he threw me down upon the sand.
    His frantic motions actually CPR.

    My chest was full and throbbing .
    I was struggling to come back.
    But then a cough, a heave and
    a feeling I had reached a destination.
    I searched the face above me:
    eye to eye and soul to soul.

    I’m long past magic and heroes,
    Make-believe or fairytale scenes.
    I’ve never seen this or any knight before;
    "Dripping armor," "shining" or otherwise.
    So how do I know those piercing green eyes
    and that voice that finally spoke, “Milady.”?


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    dahlusion commented on MY KNIGHT: IN DRIPPING ARMOR

    09-21-2009

    Wow!! Such a brilliant fairytale of perfectly poetic phrasing delivered with masterful rhythm.

    Silent1 commented on MY KNIGHT: IN DRIPPING ARMOR

    05-22-2009

    Very nice. One of those poems that leaves a smile on your face after reading. And thanks again for the comments on my work always good to have feedback.

    kenparme commented on MY KNIGHT: IN DRIPPING ARMOR

    05-12-2009

    I like this poem-has a good story and it holds interest-nice write.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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