My friends

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    My friends

    In the middle of the darkness comes a warm glow. It grows bigger and brighter, till it because blinding. I squint and let my eyes adjust. As the stinging eases I begin to see outlines of people standing in front of me. I turn and find that they have enclosed me in a circle. Shielding me, protecting me, guiding me, helping me find my way. Who are they? Why are they doing this? I wait in stunned silence for my eyes to fully adjust. Soon I can see their faces. I finally allow my self to breath again and close my eyes as a smile graces my lips. Of course who else would it be. No one but you. My friends. Thank you.

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    lonewolf commented on My friends

    01-07-2009

    nice poem. creatively written. this is what poetry is all about.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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