my friend holly

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    this is about my friend holly.  i'm sorry if it's terrible.  i've been sleep deprived for days, but i cant sleep cause i drank 5 cokes a few hours ago.  hope u like it.  :D :D :D :D :D

    my friend holly

    i made a new friend.

    her name is holly.

    she is a godsend.

    not a folly.

    thankyou, Jesus, for my new friend.

    she is the my favorite new godsend.

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    SpiritSong commented on my friend holly

    07-11-2009

    great little poem Christian girl...keep up the good work, and thanks for sharing it with us all...Tina

    christiangirl

    07/11/2009

    why, thank you, very much.

    christiangirl

    09/03/2009

    thankyou.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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