my first poem

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    this is my first poem.  i hope it's not to terrible.  thanks for reading.  :)

    my first poem

    today, i have sore muscles

    i scraped, painted, planted, dug, and labored

    do you know why?

    no, you don't

    i wanted to give my life purpose

    so i met Jesus

    i want to live for him

    so i follow his example, to serve others

    this week i'm participating in world changers

    i can make a difference

    Jesus is my life

    he gave me purpose

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    cmlestrade commented on my first poem

    07-14-2009

    Amen there is not much more to say after reading this. Except if it's based on fact you're going to learn his purpose for you as fast as he can fill your brain. terrific peom.
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    christiangirl

    09/13/2009

    thankyou.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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