My First Date,

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    My First Date,

    Dear Diary,
    Last night was my first date I've ever had
    and i wish it didn't have to end so soon.
    It's funny when looking back at it how we connected
    and made our relationship stronger, it's true.
    I don't wanna sound corny about the way I'm feeling
    i know what I'm feeling is love.
    Funny thing is, you're feeling it too.
    As i sit here, i daydream about the touch of your hand
    the way it felt on my side as he you held me.
    Or maybe, it was the way you looked at me
    or how you smiled when i laughed.
    How about the good-night kiss you gave me when
    you walked me to my doorstep.
    The way you wrapped your arms around my waist,
    the way your head tilted and your lips touched mine,
    the way your sweet tongue played with mine.
    Wow! That was a great first date.
    I can't wait for the next one. Baby.
    -Racquel, your little love bunny

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    poeticlyricist1 commented on My First Date,

    01-16-2009

    Cute. I like.

    Paradice21 commented on My First Date,

    11-21-2008

    Great job on this one. Keep on writing a you get holder you will be more compfortable writing about any and every thing. You are off to a great start.

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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