MY ADMIER

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  • kishanna100
  • just enjoying life with warm and welcoming people

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I am a Jamaican who came to America one year, seven months and seventeen days now and this site it the best that i have been introduced to. However i have been writing for six years now 
and i am very passionate about my writing. my peices are mostly about love but i have writen alittle bit of every thing. i hope to become known to alot of people through my poems. 

MY ADMIER

Dear Admier,

The motivation of you is not just the utterance of words from my lips.
But rather a feeling that awells from my  heart and bring forth a radiance of 
comforting, warmth and re-asurrance.
The sincerity of my feelings for you cannot only be appreciated through a lifetime of caring
and providing the most life can offer to you.
But to just speak these words cannot possible bring across my deepest and most inner feelings.
I express my love in many ways ,
I can at your side not only when i wish it to be
but when you need me. 
There is no loneliness that enough love will not bring fulfilment to .
There are no wounds that eough love will not heal and there are no problems overcome.
I have loved but few people in my life ,
But throughout life i have found beauty
in many thing. 
Love is the object of time and time my love
is the essence of life itself
for those who love life is 
Eternity.
 

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jmylez commented on MY ADMIER

07-27-2009

love is the object of life my fav line,,but onn a real love can truely heal any wound no matter how bad it seems love have great power, i really love this poem keep doin ur thing,,u got skills,,lol

kishanna100

07/28/2009

thank you jmylez. i hope you have a safe trip back to CT. from broklyn.

MOMofTWINS commented on MY ADMIER

07-27-2009

This poem is utterly beautiful. Very passionate and well written. Its smooth and flowing to the reader and slightly vague enough to make it accomitade your reader's personal situations. Very nice!

kishanna100

07/27/2009

thany you very much

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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