MORE THAN...

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    MORE THAN...

     Far away...
      beyond the smile that you see and the hands that you touch...
    underneath the skin i'm in and deeper than how you go inside of me...
       it's more than just love that i feel
    it's greater than just anger...
    it's more than what you see...
    i'm more than what your eyes get set on.

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    hdmac commented on MORE THAN...

    08-01-2009

    Thought-provoking poem. It seems like you are scolding someone for looking at you.
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    Anmwe commented on MORE THAN...

    05-29-2009

    Wish you had written more. It is quite nice, hopefully i will soon read a lot more from you. Keep up the great work
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    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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