mmmmm

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    mmmmm

    awakening in the middle of the night drenched in sweat, not quite coming out of my sleep stage yet
    my stomach is aflutter my heart is pounding I must have been dreaming of something astounding
    But to my great dismay I cannot recall...the images behind my lids not at all....mmmmm but what is this feeling so satisfied yet still... I cannot remember this elusive dream at will
    My hands are actually shaking I soon discover, but what is this moistness on my cover? MMMMM it's coming back slowly but surely exactly what in this dream I was doing mmmmmm

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    Strider commented on mmmmm

    08-11-2009

    This is so alluring, like my good friend poetography said the reader is allowed to go anywhere with this.
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    silvahdollah

    08/11/2009

    thank u

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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