Miss Carmel

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Miss Carmel

Im addicted to your skin and the pleasures that lie within

your body as tempting a the devil your walk built for sin

you're candy for the eyes and your voice music to the soul

im trapped in your vibe totally under your control

your perfect in a sense locked with an unbreakable code 

I want to cross into your world but can i afford the toll

you say my heart, my soul, mydevotion is enough

So I put in my all trying to call your bluff

I win

so I cringe like a child with his present at his feet 

or a family at dinner giving hanks quickly so they can eat 

I fein Icrave a taste a smell a drip a drop 

of your sweet CARAMEL 

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Thc9533 commented on Miss Carmel

05-27-2009

So passionionate . Makes me wonder what was the inspiration. I was hooked with the first couple lines . Has to be 1 of my favorites . Nice work

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