Beautiful

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  • Fantasy

    Beautiful

     From the smile on your face to the touch of your skin

    Every Breath releases exctasy so good it feels like skin

    the way your hips sway so seductive in the wind

    you are beautiful I don't have to pretend

    that confidence in your step

    you appear to need no help

    If leaving you is right

    I guess I'm going left

    I look into your soul and see apart of myself

    then I laugh

    Because I knew that three years in the past

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    ApatheticFish commented on Beautiful

    05-25-2009

    Very nice. I like the lines "if leaving you is right / I guess I'm going left." I think that's very clever.
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    Ravoya commented on Beautiful

    05-25-2009

    i feel the emotion and i felt sad for the person. this is good poetry keep it up. i'll be waiting to read more
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    lillyrain commented on Beautiful

    05-25-2009

    Awww its a very touching poem. I like it a lot. Its a very cute and endearing poem. Thats what i say at least.
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    Sx9 commented on Beautiful

    05-24-2009

    straight up piece not as beautiful as expected but nevertheless nice work,continue lets hear more of your thoughts,,walk good..
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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