metaphsyically speaking HEY CAN YOU HEAR ME?!

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  • muaddib
  • is believing that life moves in fluid fashion and is goddamn thirsty

metaphsyically speaking HEY CAN YOU HEAR ME?!

as i sit and look back the power in me starts to interact
with the ebb and the flow of the way that life goes
if it were to happen any other way
it would not be me but my heart that would pay
i have no regrets but i know most of my time
has not ben well spent
and above all else my denial of self
would be to much loss of my inner wealth
so i bid you all a fond adieu
i`ll see you on the dark side of the moon
with these hands i`ll get what i demand
step back and comprehend
i create i destroy i elate and beg for more
no debate common place so of you i hope you implore
what it means when the wave hits the shore

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WordSlinger commented on metaphsyically speaking HEY CAN YOU HEAR ME?!

08-06-2009

Wow, this is actually how I feel at this moment, cool, this makes to poems in row, I've read that deals with today, well anyway, Welcome to OP.

photochick commented on metaphsyically speaking HEY CAN YOU HEAR ME?!

07-29-2009

very deep and full of heart great poem has a perfect flow and grand structure of words they flow from one line to the next perfectly looking forward to more post from you keep writing you have a grand talent hidden within you

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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