Mental Pain

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    Mental Pain

    I cried all night like somebody had died
    Man nobody's knows
    The pain I feel inside.
    Crying, Crying, Crying,
    Screaming out my lungs
    God I need your help
    Before something else goes wrong.
    I live my life all day
    I live my life everyday
    I live my life the best way I can
    Man, man, man,
    I wish I could start all over again.
    Pain is so hard
    Its like you gain more everyday
    But you would never know how bad it is
    Until you feel like you're being pushed away.
    I could cry all day
    I could cry all night
    But for some reason I hold it in
    I think I just need a friend to talk to before my time end
    Or maybe I need to try to get through this
    And get reborn again.

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    Kary commented on Mental Pain

    11-02-2009

    Very nice..sad..and anyone who has ever faced depression or known someone who has can truly relate to this one!

    symmetry commented on Mental Pain

    09-18-2009

    Your pain is tangible, I hope the catharsis comes from the eloquence of which your words ventures forth. You have given those words wings, that your voice have helped carry into the ethers. They will fall again as rain and understanding that you have created that allows the world to grow in beauty. All this, from your words, your pain. Nice.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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