Memories #1

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    Memories #1

    We shared few days

    we went dancing…

    I felt a touching awake

    a balanced harmony

    thus, it didn't make sense

    to feel that way.

     

    I felt a dense cloud

    when he left

    inside, deep in my heart

    I didn't want to talk…

    I closed my eyes

    holding the unknown.

     

    Was there something lost?

    Rain... about to fall

    I looked outside

    and it was a sunny day…

    The rain came from my soul

    running through my face.

     

    Where is that man?

    Where did he come from?

    Why was the energy so strong?

    Did I meet him before?

    Many lives in the past?

    Somewhere? I’ll never know.

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    BadBadBear commented on Memories #1

    10-10-2009

    Quite an interesting work leading towards deep mystery. Excellent write.

    Rabanne928

    10/10/2009

    Thank you, BBB! English is not my mother language and I am attempting to write poetry in English for about two years. Blessings, Rabanne.

    BadBadBear

    10/13/2009

    Ahh but you're doing so well. Blessings, BBB

    california commented on Memories #1

    08-06-2009

    VERY, VERY NICE. HOPING YOU WILL WRITE SOME MORE.......? CALIFORNIA

    Rabanne928

    10/10/2009

    California, thank you very much! I appreciate your comment. Will get more frequently here... I'm pursuing my PhD in Business and have little time for this wonderful entertainment. Best regards, Rabanne

    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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