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This is one of my first poems that I ever came up with and I really spoke my feelings on this one. It kind of talks about how I felt for someone who in return, in my dreams, I knew would not want me anyway. So it's like a fantasy in my head, but in reality it would never be.

Me

I like to write, so good, so bright. This is me, this

is I so quiet and shy. I watch the day, I watch the night

from dark to light. I think of you, I think of me, happy

together as can be. I had a dream, I had a fear that no

one would care. That you weren't there, and I had

nothing/no one to love. None of the above.

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warsaw commented on Me

08-22-2009

Young lady you are talented and thank you for sharing but I promise that special someone will come along but always when you least expect it meanwhile be the very best you that ypu can be for your future and keep on writting your good sincerely WARSAW

Hampton commented on Me

07-01-2009

Cleverly conceived and written with poetic flow in a simple and straight forward style that should appeal to all who read it.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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