Love me?

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Love me?

Spare me the details, if all hope is gone, my love truly fails. Sad,

but true, look at me, take a look at you. Think about all that we

can be, think about you and me. If you can't see us there, then

why are you still here? I feel a spark, but all you see is the dark.

I day dream, but you always redeem. I got lost in your eyes, so

hypmatized but your heart a dime size. I try to change for you,

but why? To be who? I'm tired of waiting for you to see, all that we

can be.

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Hampton commented on Love me?

07-14-2009

A simple request is delivered in the title to this poem and the poem itsself expresses the frustration that follows.

Pam44 commented on Love me?

07-09-2009

I truely love this. I can really relate to this! Keep up the good work and hope you write more stuff like this! :)

ladypooh commented on Love me?

06-29-2009

this is a very nice poem fill with love and lost keep writing.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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