Lovesick

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Lovesick

When the sun comes up and I see it shine,
It reminds me of why I can, and do think of you all the time.
You light up my world, you darken it so.
You bring out parts of me that i never wanted to know.

Let me be, leave me alone.
Its because of you that im being pelted with stones.

They warned me not to love you, they said you'd make me ill.
I didnt want to kill you but oh the things you made me feel.
When you tried to leave me, it did the opposite of relieve me.

When you wake up, there I'll be.
When you fall asleep, there where you regected me.
Right next to you heart, where you wouldnt let me in.
Im going to commit these sins over and over agian,
'Cause i have no chioce but to love you.

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Artie commented on Lovesick

09-07-2010

Obsession can be a powerfull thing, as you have shown here - 10 from me

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

Carmonie’s Poems (15)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Lovesick 2
R.I.P (I Thought You Were Dead) 5
Perspective Of A Murderer 1
What's To Gain, Besides The Pain 1
Do Your Own Thing 1
Over 0
Meaning Of Glamour 1
Keep On 0
Dirty Socks 1
The Adventures Of A Child 0
Little House On The Prarie 0
Puberty 1
A Heart 0
Life Poem 0
W.A.B (Will Always Be) 0