Love's end

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    Love's end

    Once more you leave me, no kiss, no goodbye.
    You act as though you don’t care, and I don’t know why.
    You never seem to give me a second thought
    When reassurance that I was still desired was all I sought
    Sometimes when you leave you say you’ll call later
    But the chances of me calling you were far greater
    I’m leaving, I’ll tell you, when you walk through the door.
    But when I see you I can’t find the words, I’m not mad anymore.
    We go to bed and as always you turn your back to me.
    There’s no more closeness, there’s no more intimacy.
    My love for you used to be an overflowing cup.
    You’ve taken all my love and never once filled it up.
    When you read this letter and realize I’m gone.
    You’ll probably say what took me so long.
    My love was my hope, that you’d love me again
    But my love is gone, my hopes reached a dead end

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    JaleesaSoco commented on Love's end

    02-12-2010

    I like this poem. Like the lines, "When you read this and realize I'm gone. You'll probably say what took me song long." That made the poem all that more intimate. Liked that. :)

    mistervee

    02/13/2010

    Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. You wonder why we don't write when things are going well. Good question. Could it be when things are going wrong we have all this idle time to reflect ?

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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