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    Love, man, its serious, can make u scream out deliriously or make you covet something so ferverously, its like a smile, like a frown, its like a soft passionately given kiss followed by a gaze that deep as an abyss, its like a slap in the face that makes you want to chase, its like sweating palms, heart pounding inside, the observance of a presence, hot flash, its like damn it man you can't let yourself go like this, its like i miss you, it like i hate you dont ever want to see you again, its like why, its like because, its like forever, like i was, its a moment, its a era, its her laugh, the smell of her hair, it him trying to impress u, always wanting your attention look daddy look, that love without a mention, man its deep but very shallow, its confusing, its a battle, its two spirits interlacing(man i dont even know if thats a word) its u, its me, it in a sense originalpoetry, it her, its him, it us, it them, its................ its love

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    baddreams commented on love

    03-17-2009

    nice poem

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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