Love Should Be...

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    Love Should Be...

    Water ripples,
    Moonbeams in my hair.
    My love right beside me,
    I don't want to be anywhere.

    Freeze this moment.
    Stop it in time.
    I look up at you,
    With your hand in mine.

    I see so much love,
    We're so much in love.

    But time keeps moving,
    The moments pass on.
    But I'll remain in your arms.
    Until the break of dawn.

    I'll never leave you,
    I daresay it's true. 
    By your side forever.
    Always loving you. 

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    BikemanRJ commented on Love Should Be...

    10-22-2010

    Great word flow and easy to read. You have captured this moment in time and expressed your love so well. As the time and moments pass may they continue to bring you love joy and happiness. God Bless Randy
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    cousinsoren commented on Love Should Be...

    09-26-2010

    LOVE! LOVE! LOVE! I Love this poem ,especially this quatrain: "But time keeps moving, The moments pass on. But I'll remain in your arms. Until the break of dawn." My rating for intensity of mood, and all -round pleasing literary features and clarity is 8
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    ginga commented on Love Should Be...

    09-25-2010

    fraz, I enjoyed the poignant tone of this poem of fond love and companionship. ginga
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    nonners commented on Love Should Be...

    09-25-2010

    your work always puts a smile on my face .it just flows i loved the hell out of it
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    ABYSS commented on Love Should Be...

    09-20-2010

    Very sweet and beautiful, best feeling in the world to be in love,and how content it can be! You wrote that simply and well put.
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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