Love Me

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Love Me

I've been hurt.
The pain, the bruises,the scars still live years later.
They won't go away no matter how hard I try.
Stealing away a piece of my heart
A part of my soul is gone.
Leaving me is darkness.
I forgot how to love, how to trust .
Turning my heart ice cold.
I developed a temper and a tongue of fire to protect myself.
Around people I go into survival mode.
No trust , no love.
Then out of darkness you came.
You teach me to trust and love again.
God sent an angel my way.
Memories can't be erased but they can be eased.

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kdarcy commented on Love Me

11-20-2010

Love the concept, a few rough spots for me, one or two typos, you write with much feeling and emotion, I will search your works again soon, stop by and see if any of mine interest you, be well k

Barrelracer1991

11/17/2011

This one is one of the first I ever wrote. It was written after I got out of a really bad relationship. I was 17 years old. I am glad you like it tho . I am proud of it since it was one of my first poems. The first one I ever actually sat down and put on paper is also on here it is entitled A Barrelracing Competition.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

Barrelracer1991’s Poems (18)

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When I'm With You 0
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Love Me 1