love lost

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    love lost

    How can I can be in love with you, when I am in love with someone else
    Am I using you to replace the love I lost
    But if I lose you, then what do I have left
    To keep you but at what cost
    Your smile is beauty it make me very happy
    You love me through the pain and my disater
    To be with you can only end in heartache, this is true
    But you seem to be my bestfriend what am I to do
    To keep in my heart is what I want to do
    But I can't because I have fell in love with someone that is not you

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    olmagal commented on love lost

    07-03-2009

    Short and sweet. A little grammar slips and construction but very nice.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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