Love Is A Curse

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    Love Is A Curse

    That girl that you see walking
    Down the street towards you
    Was once a happy queen
    In the land of I love you

    She smiled every second
    Of every Single Day
    And when his arms would hold her
    She’d slowly drift away

    But then her time was over
    And she drifted back to earth
    So now she never smiles
    It’s like love is a curse

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    phatdaddee commented on Love Is A Curse

    09-28-2010

    Good job! I like this poem. I just wish you had written more of it. I believe you could push it further.

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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