Love Hurts

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    Poem Commentary

    Odd, I’m in the best relationship of my life and my twisted little writers mind sludges through the muck of those suffering, broken and disgraced... may we never just lay there

    Love Hurts

    Excuse me but is that blood on your cuff

    Did you wipe your mouth with your sleeve again

    It must be from when you sunk your teeth into my heart

    I hope that it doesn’t leave a stain

     

    Never mind me, I'll just lay here and bleed 

       

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    beautifuldeath commented on Love Hurts

    02-01-2013

    I fear as though with this write that you have so eloquently penned that you are the little fly on my wall watching my painful life unfold. Great write!
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    soulwriter

    02/01/2013

    How have you been my poetic friend - by your comments I would say growing... I know those periods and sometimes they are our greatest inspiration while being our grandest challenges. Hang in there and write to be free.

    poett commented on Love Hurts

    01-29-2013

    Missing my fellow poet friends hope many come back including you
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    cheronld commented on Love Hurts

    06-21-2011

    Allrighty then.....this was short, sweet and very very to the point...Cher
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    soulwriter

    06/23/2011

    To the POINT is GOOOD... thank you I'm off to read you Soul

    mufasa commented on Love Hurts

    05-30-2011

    Some days my life is like this poem ,some days not. Its how I respond that counts.Beautiful write.
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    soulwriter

    06/17/2011

    Yes, some days - sometimes.... thank you so much for smiling! Soul

    frog commented on Love Hurts

    05-28-2011

    I REALLY liked this poem because it is simple and to the point. Perhaps the pain of the past helps all of us to really appreciate precious moments of the present.
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    soulwriter

    06/17/2011

    Your comments are appreciated in many ways - this was a passing thought of emotions that sting but certainly can be healed... Thx Soul

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