lost without you

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    lost without you
    Hold my hand in the morning
    And help me on my way
    For I am lost without you
    and don't know what to say

    My mind and heart are clouded
    And I'm not seeing to clear
    For I am lost without you
    And need to have you near

    Praying that you will touch me
    And hold me in your arms
    For I am lost without you
    and all your wonderful charms

    So please don't push the issue
    That I seem to be a wreck
    For I am lost without you
    On this long and lonesome trek

    It's like wakeing in the morning
    and knowing somethings wrong
    For I am lost without you
    And been without you far too long

    So tell me words I need to hear
    And help me to understand
    For I am lost without you
    and only just a man

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    tennessee commented on lost without you

    08-18-2009

    Sweet and heartfelt. I write in whatever form I please and you should continue to too..... lol.
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    nekosuave commented on lost without you

    07-02-2009

    to understand the way the mind and heart feels is a good trait to have wow you got it i really enjoyed this one alot
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    Elke commented on lost without you

    07-02-2009

    I think it's a beautiful poem. It's very smooth,-no wrinkes. It's actually the first Love tag poem I have really liked.
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    tomcrashwilson

    07/02/2009

    thank you you are to kind

    kalina commented on lost without you

    06-06-2009

    I liked the poem, but you need to be careful with spelling. (I can't help it, I'm a former teacher.) In line 6 "to" should be "too", in line 17 "wakeing" should be "waking", and in line 18 "somethings" should be something's (contraction for something is). At the end of a sentence or thought thee should also be a punctuation mark. Not only did I like the sentiment, I also liked the visual shape the poem presented--almost like a tear about to detach and fall.
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    tomcrashwilson

    07/02/2009

    I guess i need a Tacher thank you for your thoughts I do have a problem with that.

    wildcat691 commented on lost without you

    02-11-2009

    that poem was beautiful
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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