Lost Soul

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    Lost Soul
    I am a Lost Soul searching for something that I can never find. I am a lost soul hoping for a little piece of mind.

    I am a lost soul always on the outside looking in, a lost soul never truly fitting in.

    I am a lost soul searching for something that can never be mine, a lost soul wanting to find only a little love and piece of mind.

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    linlee commented on Lost Soul

    06-27-2009

    Hey, lost soul. I'm going to tell you how I feel about this poem: huh?! What happened to the rest of it. This is a great beginning, good rhyming, unforced, smooth flowing, natural rhythm, but it's just a great beginning. Where's the rest of it? What is the something that can never be yours? Is it the love and the piece of mind. Peace of mind, by the way, is cliche,so I'm wondering if the different spelling was on purpose. (I just read something about cliches on the home page.) It sounds like you have so much more to say that I want to read more. Do you think you could work on this and give us more? If you rewrite this and let us see a little bit more of you, I'll read it and give you more feedback.
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    Magik62

    06/27/2009

    The poem is finished, you see it;s left to the reader to add what they themselves is seeking. It is to encourage the reader to search they're own heart, what are they seeking and cannot find. Each one that reads it comes away with something different and unique.

    HeavenlyAngel commented on Lost Soul

    01-08-2009

    i think this describes all people in this world.
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