A Lonely Place To Be

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A Lonely Place To Be

           I look around me and what do I see, but a lonely place to be.                         Rather in the mountains, woods or sea, it is nothing without
                                     you here with me.

          I do not know what is to became of me, for what am I without
             you. What shall become of me, in this lonely place to be. 

         I look around me for your smile and thereby know what will become
          of me, and know that I can indeed be saved from this lonely place
                                              to be. 

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GrimReaper commented on A Lonely Place To Be

01-13-2011

I think the it lonely to be alone withoth someone, but even more lonely think you are alone without someone.

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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