Lost Part 2

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Lost Part 2

im lost in a sea of emotion and rationality
and my destiny is partially determined by me
yet its hard to tread water when it runs so deep
And i must lay awake because ill drown if a sleep
yet its a quiet body, not so much as a peep
yet i feel a chill cause i know that silent predators creep
it's just me my life preserver and my paranoid thoughts
About new love past love ,and love that was lost
At what cost do i maintain a promise to self
To not make a move to my lifes in good health
and good stature can i capture what rightfully mine
Will my prize be there for me at the end of the time
Thisway of living has to be labeled a crime
because im stealing from myself, and running out of life lines
and when the time is up, sure enough a rope as been tossed
A holy ship has come and found me, Im no longer lost.

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LadyIntellect commented on Lost Part 2

03-23-2009

i am lost for words right now.....Loved it!

MistiLane commented on Lost Part 2

03-23-2009

Great wording in this piece. I like what you had to say, most days you think there's no one else feeling what you're feeling. Definitely keep on writing! Read some of mine if you get a chance.

obg3684 commented on Lost Part 2

03-14-2009

Great poem bro keep writin

Wren87 commented on Lost Part 2

03-14-2009

This is probably one of the best poems i read check mine out when you have the time

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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Lost Part 2 4
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