LOST IN MY SONG

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    LOST IN MY SONG

                           

     copyright 2007 

     

                                  

                      Standing by the jukebox I looked for my song

                      I caught a glimpse

                      When he walked in this is where it will begin

                       He turned and looked my way

                        Our eyes locked I speak and nothing comes out                                                                                             

                       My words, emotions we were lost in my song

                      Our emptiness inside is finally whole

                      we have waited for each other so long      

                      Our bodies are close to burning

                       We try to run

                       But the flashing lights blind us

                     We dropped to the ground

                     Looking up at the sky the rain starts falling

                      filling our eyes with tears

                     Someone try to help us we are lost in my song

                                        

                     Following our hearts to the music

                     we start to sing out

                     the song that played made us find our souls      

                                        

                      We turn and see an angel she then embraces us

                      as her mouth comes close to our ears

                      she whispers just listen to your hearts

                      He turned and looked my way

                      Our eyes locked into our hearts

                       I speak and nothing comes out                                                                                            

                       My words, emotions we were lost in my song

                      Our emptiness inside is finally whole

                      we have waited for each other so  long

                        Now that I’m your wife all the blank pages of my life

                       Are filled with the lyrics of our love

                       we were meant to meet in my lost song

     

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    Chaos128 commented on LOST IN MY SONG

    07-05-2009

    A lyrical narrative that delivers everything the first line promises. I'm tracking down fellow brooklyn poets on this site to see how we see the world. You're the first one and I consider myself off to a very good start.

    majgirl56

    07/18/2009

    thanks for the comment

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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