I DID NOT MEAN TO HURT YOU

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    I DID NOT MEAN TO HURT YOU

    I walked along the beach the other day Watching the ocean and thinking of all the things I needed to say to you
    My thoughts just overwhelmed me and I watched as all my feelings
    were being swept away , swept away
    I did not mean to hurt you I didn't mean to cheat I know it was I that broke us apart
    Now That you're gone I'll have to carry on The memory of you As I fall to the sand the band begins to play It might be our song
    But all I can hear is the rhythm of my broken heart People run around me as I look up
    Faceless people run around me
    I start to scream they're the demons of my past
    Know one else will ever take your space within my heart Keeping the love we had so close to me I will never let it go
    Oh god I wished that you were still here and not beneath the earth
    Sometimes I feel you watching over me
    You are what I still need to carry on
    Let me know if you are there can you hear me I have things to say to you Is that you standing in the fog come take my hand out of the sand
    You can live again inside of me I leave you with a kiss with luck we meet again Good-Bye my love forever

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    Chaos128 commented on I DID NOT MEAN TO HURT YOU

    10-02-2009

    The protagonist in this piece seems confused (an effect traumatic emotional experiences often have). It's aura of past regrets AND anxious immediacy give it a panicky quality that definitely makes it memorable.

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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