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    lOSS

    It comes and goes
    from time to time
    the pain I feel and
    loss inside.

    No longer the same
    as once was
    someThing came out
    and someone stayed.

    I feel I've lost a part
    of myself;changed I am.

    Lost and confused
    I'm a prisoner in my own body.

    Where is my direction, my focus
    what happens from here?

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    sherry122 commented on lOSS

    05-13-2009

    Nicely written poem. You should learn to love and appreciate yourself, this way you won’t see yourself as a prisoner in your own body, but as someone that’s worth a lot and capable to make a difference in this world. You learn from your past experiences and move further in live. So you shouldn’t be seeing your past as a loss, but more as a profit. Stop focusing on your past, this way you’re loosing a lot of positive directions from your present moment. “Let us not look back in anger or

    aggieprof commented on lOSS

    03-23-2009

    I like the 1st stanza. Has a nice beat.

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    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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