Loss of a Loved One

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    Loss of a Loved One

     I lost control over my feelings for you
    I thought we pulled it through
    I guess it wasn't true

    I'm so bitter so cold
    Now I have no one to hold
    I have been told

    I thought that we'd last forever
    But that forever is gone
    I knew I did something wrong

    I never meant for this to happen
    When all I thought of was never ending love
    I love you with all my heart
    I should've been smart

    I regret the things I've done
    But baby please don't leave me alone
    I hurt so much inside
    That I know I lied

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    StandingBear commented on Loss of a Loved One

    06-23-2009

    To love and lost is at least much better than to have never experienced this great feeling before. Great write. 10
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    dustyrebel70 commented on Loss of a Loved One

    06-22-2009

    Such a heart wrenching experience for you. I thought you used nice imagery and it was from the heart. Good poem
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    cliftondurant commented on Loss of a Loved One

    06-22-2009

    IT hurt when you broke up with someone you love your heart ache for true love good poem
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    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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