Looking right through me.

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  • Childhood

    Looking right through me.
    Looking right through me
    I sware that boy never new me,
    not knowing where to go,heart gripped with pain
    looking through glass memories they
    come and go so fast he cant hide,can you explain
    just a fleeting pain in a one man show where does he go?
    Feeling like there's no tomorrow only
    looking at life with such sorrow,he plainly see's there's only
    one of me as he looks right through me.

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    joanlorraine commented on Looking right through me.

    02-13-2009

    Damn. Single mom to single mom. Well done.
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    cottonluv commented on Looking right through me.

    02-13-2009

    nice poem angel.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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