Longing

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    Longing

     As I sit here in the pouring rain
    I think am going insane
    You have severely messed with my brain
    You dont understand
    How I have this longing for you
    I want to dismiss it
    This feeling I have for you
    It makes me think of nothing else
    I just have to hold you in my arms
    I will not go another day
    With this longing I have only for you
    I need to feel your warmth
    I need to be in your embrace
    Oh this longing is making me ill
    I get a chill in this rain
    Please take away my pain
    Oh sweet longing my desire for you
    Oh is it ever true
    This longing I have only for you...

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    stellar commented on Longing

    10-19-2009

    love the element of water incorporated in your poem...simply love it
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    dumplin commented on Longing

    09-24-2009

    Once again, very desperate and searching for something that is almost impossible to achieve. A bit scattered, but full of feeling. Keep writing.
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    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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