Live to live

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Live to live

Gods fingers caress my face
as I lay back in a bed of his making
Eyes closed I breathe in the blessing
the sun so warm today
the hairs on the back of my neck
snap to attention
Longing the perfection
 I see in each direction
This was made from love
to love
Trying to fit this into one life
It would seem time be the enemy
So I won't waste a moment more
just breathe in the mistakes
and exhale the forgiving
all the while looking into the mirror

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Merlyn commented on Live to live

02-22-2011

So Beautiful to feel God touch you. I can think of no better thing. Perfection, to see perfection, you must be seeing nature as I am unaware of any other perfection. And if it were me, I would breathe in the forgiving and exhale the mistakes. For one is yours and the other gone. Nice work.

rippeyrip

02/22/2011

good point on the breathing

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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