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    • sadisticwriter
    • miss you bubby....ur the best...u'll always be in my heart. :-(

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    I have put up with abuse for far too long...and if it wasn't for me leaving when i did i probably wouldn't be here right now.

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    There is a reflection of pain in her eyes, as she fights back tears.
    Trying to figure out why she has put up with it all of these years.
    Innocence gone.
    Just taken away.
    Struggling to deal with it & be free someday.
    Tries to tell someone but no one believes her cries.
    Just another young girl getting some attention through lies.
    Suicide has crossed her mind but she will not go out that way.
    Thinking well maybe if he cant find me, he just won't beat me today
    Perfect smile.
    Broken soul.
    Living in this situation that she just can't control.
    Things get worse & he beats her more.
    Loses all self respect for herself when he comes through that door.
    Fed up & full of hope she tried to fight back.
    He pulled out a knife, all she saw was black.
    Out of her misery & out of her pain.
    Put her in such a place that she cant even explain.
    But she tried to tell someone although they didn't believe her cries.
    Just maybe if someone would have listened...this young girl would still be alive

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    Rhymer commented on Listen

    03-02-2010

    Abuse is never acceptable whether it is mental or physical it is wrong. Sad but an excellent read that may help others. 10 from me.

    sadisticwriter

    03/03/2010

    thanx for your kind words...and that is what i'm trying to say abuse isn't right and no one should go the that type of pain no one.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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