Alone

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  • sadisticwriter
  • miss you bubby....ur the best...u'll always be in my heart. :-(

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This poem is about feeling left out from everyone in your family even form your friends. I feel so alone even when there is some one right beside me.

Alone

Some may call it distorted Reality...but maybe that's the place i need to be.

No Mother...
    Brenda, So caught up in her work and my sister's every need that she never has time for me or anyone else

No Father...
    Bennie, So caught up in his work and so dependent on others which most can not give in return.

No Sister...
    Rhonda, So controlled be her husband's every word that she never has time for her family, but has all the time in the world for his.

No Sister...
    Missy, So caught up in her wealth that she pays no mind to the people beneath her.

No Brother...
    Brian, Oh so very close to me...But not here any more at the times i need him the most.

No Little Sister...
    Stephanie, So caught up in her own fabolous life that she doesn't care for any one in her family execpt her friends...and has no more time or love for me and our parents.

No Husband...
    James, So controlling,abusive,and so bad on pills,that he never really realized that the one person that loved him the most was standing right in front of him...and then left.

No Love Life...
    Not now anyway, Because every guy i know thinks that just because i have a few exyra pounds that i'm not good enough for them.

No Friends...
    All Gone, eigther in collage or wants nothing to do with me because of my past or things that i may have said then later on regreted.

No Family...
    Stuck-up, They are so caught up in there own little world that they don't care for anyone besides them selves and the one's closest to them.

No Me...
    Amber, So lost in my thoughts of the past that i am dead scared of what the future may hold for me.

"Distorted Reality"... Maybe that's the place i want too be.

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inkmaster commented on Alone

03-02-2010

Nice write! By the way up is a two letter word..~Inkmaster~

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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