Life's Rollercoaster

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    now the end to this can be interpreted as one of two different things-

    1.) death-your dying and thats the only true way that lifes rollercoaster stops, come to an end. because eventually you will die and you will be truly home. "That which comes together, must fall apart"

    or

    2.) when you are scared or hurt or angry-whatever the case may be-when you return home, your problems can seem to disappear. and you're happy. you're home.

    whenever you feel yourself at your wits end, just turn to this poem. maybe it can give you the courage to carry on. to move through all your going through. it is ment to give you the courage you need.

    Life's Rollercoaster

    Life is like a rollercoaster
    There are twists and bends and loops,
    sometimes you end up upside down, suspended in thin air.
    Then you feel like your gonna fall.
    But then you start going again,
    everything is fun yet simultaneously scary.
    But you always end up back at the beginning
    Back where you started.
    It isn't always where you want to be
    you wish with all you have that the ride would keep going
    You don't want it to ever stop, never.
    Because even with the ups and downs, you still love the thrill of the ride, of the the craziness endowed.
    But then sometimes, when you're at its peak, it's highest point, and you look down, You just want to jump, to leap from the ride,
    from life's rollercoaster.
    Because you don't think that things can get any worse, and they can't get better
    But then they do.
    Then life's rollercoaster stops,
    You get off,
    and somehow you're not in the same place.
    You're somewhere better.
    there are no more twists and bends and loops,
    no more ups and downs.
    You have no need to be scared anymore.
    You're home

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    MarioM420 commented on Life's Rollercoaster

    10-19-2009

    Sorry I got caught up with how the poem made me feel, I forgot to tell you that I think its fantastic!

    NewReality

    10/19/2009

    awwwww. mar...thank you. i know you'll always be there.

    MarioM420 commented on Life's Rollercoaster

    10-19-2009

    Brianna, this poem really means a lot. It's tough not knowing what life's gonna throw at you next. It's funny how little control we really have over our lives, we just live in them, and do the best we can, and hope that someday it turns out something resembling what we wanted, or at least something we can live with and maybe even be happy in. But through all the twists and turns and ups and downs, its good to know you'll always have someone there to help you through it. And I'm so happy that your that person in my life, and I'm grateful you've let me be yours. I want you to know that I'll always be there for you. I don't know what life will bring next, but I know you'll be there, and I wouldn't have it any other way, because I know that together we can make it through anything. I want you to know that I love you, and I'm not going anywhere.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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