LIFE

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    LIFE

    Too many times my heart been broken like a branch off a tree,
    I used to wonder as a child what life would be,
    and it seems to be something your fighting
    At times I wish I could wake up and start over
    But I know I have to just keep moving on
    hoping that this life would only get better,
    Why is life so hard?
    I often wonder when my grace would come from above
    The painI feel inside is strong
    sometimes I feel overwhelmed by it
    It keeps my mind racing and going on and on, I must prevail over this obstacle
    over this demon that continuely tortures me
    I feel like a cow getting branded, branding me with the pain of my past
    Life is a battle, if you allow it to beat u down, it will
    Mine feels like a maze, trapped in the same darkest place
    A tree is calm and still
    how would life Be if it was calm and still
    In the Sense Of NO PAIN

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    Troubador commented on LIFE

    07-17-2009

    Missylea, your poetry is really difficult to grasp in the beginning I enjoy the personification as well as the symbolism might I make a suggestion stanza breaakjs with shorter verses that way your reader can ingest your poetic words and experiance them first hand so to speak good poem liked the imagery though rather disturbing

    missylea

    07/17/2009

    Thanks but i really dont understand Stanza breaakjs

    MsKrystle commented on LIFE

    07-17-2009

    I think alot of people feel like this at times, so you're not alone. All I can say is dont give up. Thanx for sharing.

    missylea

    07/17/2009

    Thanks

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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