Life with pain

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Life with pain

Pain seeks deep into the heart like a sharp knife. Even though it all will still remain the same, tearrs will vear-but I won't fall

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Phoenix9 commented on Life with pain

02-06-2009

dark and short, nice

TwistedAce commented on Life with pain

02-05-2009

I like where your going with the poem, i'd like to see an extension maybe even just a few more lines.. i'll check back in a few days to read it :)

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