LIFE GOES ON

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    LIFE GOES ON


    words are like knives,
    the come from all different directions,
    confusion is like salt on those bloody wounds,
    tearing me apart inside,
    not knowing what to do next
    not knowing what i want is stopping me from progressing
    ,from moving on ,
    from being all that i can be,
    life goes on but i stay behind
    not knowing what the future holds
    too many surprises
    to many words
    too many suggestions
    to many times of heart break and loss of interest
    confusion fills my head
    never understanding
    but life goes on
    and i stay behind
    wishing that i could decide
    wishing i had something to look forward to
    wishing i had you

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    sosmooth51 commented on LIFE GOES ON

    09-25-2009

    beuatifully written.... awesome poem.... i have good poems too if ur interested....well if ur daring rather

    ChiefBoy35 commented on LIFE GOES ON

    09-19-2009

    Mmmm, words all too formiliar. I hear your cries and I wish to open my hand out to you for some lyrical insperation.

    Kdaddy commented on LIFE GOES ON

    09-17-2009

    A good poem, I have been there where you feel like you're going nowhere and life still goes on. Good job.

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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